Odd that you wrote two very hot stories a dozen years ago, one day apart. Despite promises then, in the comment section, after much pleading by many readers, you still never wrote a sequel to either.
Three years ago, you wrote this one. The writing style, spelling, syntax etc improved greatly. The story here is a bit hard to believe; no one remembers dreams that long or detailed. But it is pretty sexy. I note that the earlier stories got many comments, but this one got none. Maybe the readers were disappointed you didn't write those sequels,
One small, like tiny, point is the repeated reference to the wives pussies as "her" or "she." Probably a matter of personal taste but I found that jarring and kind of distasteful.
The scenario is just about perfect - man loves wife so much, he wants her to have the best of everything. And that includes cocks.
He is in so much trepidation about her being unfaithful, but the thought of his wife slutting herself with other men excites him like nothing else. And she makes his fantasy into reality better even than in his dreams!!!
Brilliantly written! Hot! And the conversation between hubby and Hotwife really takes this story to the top-level!
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Anonymous09/14/15
What a pile of deranged garbage !
No writing skills, no literacy, and is as if written in an asylum cell ! 1* not low enough !!
If you continue writing , you should try to get an editor, or someone to re-read. Quite and quiet contain the same letters but are not interchangeable. Also passed is not exactly the same as past.
English
Back for more
Hooray, Tony's back. Where you been for so many years? Love your hard cuckold stories.
Nicely Done
Hope to see more...
good to see you writing again!!!!
like the story, you know i love your writing!!! When you comeing out with your book?
CE
Glad you are back
Looking forward to additions to Nasty Wife
More more
It's good, Thanks again!
Really want you to continue Discovering My Nasty Wife too :)
Love it!
cant wait to read more!
Style, follow ups?
Odd that you wrote two very hot stories a dozen years ago, one day apart. Despite promises then, in the comment section, after much pleading by many readers, you still never wrote a sequel to either.
Three years ago, you wrote this one. The writing style, spelling, syntax etc improved greatly. The story here is a bit hard to believe; no one remembers dreams that long or detailed. But it is pretty sexy. I note that the earlier stories got many comments, but this one got none. Maybe the readers were disappointed you didn't write those sequels,
One small, like tiny, point is the repeated reference to the wives pussies as "her" or "she." Probably a matter of personal taste but I found that jarring and kind of distasteful.
Great story!!!
The scenario is just about perfect - man loves wife so much, he wants her to have the best of everything. And that includes cocks.
He is in so much trepidation about her being unfaithful, but the thought of his wife slutting herself with other men excites him like nothing else. And she makes his fantasy into reality better even than in his dreams!!!
Brilliantly written! Hot! And the conversation between hubby and Hotwife really takes this story to the top-level!
What a pile of deranged garbage !
No writing skills, no literacy, and is as if written in an asylum cell ! 1* not low enough !!
Wonderful erotic Tease!
This is classy, well-written eroticism. Super. More, More!
Great flash erotica.
Great flash story. Five
1*
fag cuck shit.
Editing
If you continue writing , you should try to get an editor, or someone to re-read. Quite and quiet contain the same letters but are not interchangeable. Also passed is not exactly the same as past.
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