I really liked the story. Now I am waiting for the next chapters. Please try to be more descriptive about the sex scenes and try to make them a little bit more erotic from now on. His mum was forced to make sex with him, but actually enjoyed it, so make her act more whorish next time!
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Anonymous06/28/10
Take heed of all the comments made.
It was short. It had a plot. There was some sex. I think knowing of the "plan" would have been helpful. Dialogue is always a builder...if it is done correctly.
Did you explain how the Mother knew it was the son ?
My suggestion for this story is to let it fade.
You have enough talent to submit another story I am sure. Learn from this one.
THIS WAS OUT AND OUT RAPE OF THE WORST KIND, A BOY RAPES HIS MOTHER. THAT IS THE BIGGEST TURN OFF EVER . RAPE NO MATTER TO WHO OR BY WHO.THIS BASTARD SHOULD BE HUNG. AS FOR THE END OF THIS STORY IT SUCKED. THERE WAS NO LOGIC AT ALL...........LAROC OF AGES
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Anonymous02/04/13
I thought it was a very good story, and
maybe the title was the best part. "The Fucking of My Mother." That's what lots of boys'd love to do, get their fat young prick up their own mother's cunt and blow their young balls up where they were once a baby. What's wrong with that? Up his mother's mommy-hole is where a boy's creamy sperm belongs.
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Anonymous11/02/14
My man
Next time you rape your mother I hope you breed a baby up her hole!
English
No More
one of the worst I've read.
Lame
Simplistic & rushed story that is not worthy of submission. Another retarded disciple of Samuelx.
good one
i thought it was good, short is not bad, to the point great ending
had me turned on
Needs work...
... lots of it! Too rushed. No build up whatsoever. Clearly the work of an amateur.
It works
It was ok. It works. Could have been better. I do like the shortness but a little more eroticisme with the mom would have really helped me get off.
Not too good.
Maybe you should try doing something else with your time.
weird!
save people's time!
Nice start!
I really liked the story. Now I am waiting for the next chapters. Please try to be more descriptive about the sex scenes and try to make them a little bit more erotic from now on. His mum was forced to make sex with him, but actually enjoyed it, so make her act more whorish next time!
Take heed of all the comments made.
It was short. It had a plot. There was some sex. I think knowing of the "plan" would have been helpful. Dialogue is always a builder...if it is done correctly.
Did you explain how the Mother knew it was the son ?
My suggestion for this story is to let it fade.
You have enough talent to submit another story I am sure. Learn from this one.
story
reminds me of when I fucked my own mom
ending
i think the ending could have been better to what could have been a great plot.
RAPE RAPE RAPE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
THIS WAS OUT AND OUT RAPE OF THE WORST KIND, A BOY RAPES HIS MOTHER. THAT IS THE BIGGEST TURN OFF EVER . RAPE NO MATTER TO WHO OR BY WHO.THIS BASTARD SHOULD BE HUNG. AS FOR THE END OF THIS STORY IT SUCKED. THERE WAS NO LOGIC AT ALL...........LAROC OF AGES
I thought it was a very good story, and
maybe the title was the best part. "The Fucking of My Mother." That's what lots of boys'd love to do, get their fat young prick up their own mother's cunt and blow their young balls up where they were once a baby. What's wrong with that? Up his mother's mommy-hole is where a boy's creamy sperm belongs.
My man
Next time you rape your mother I hope you breed a baby up her hole!
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