All Comments on 'The Fucking of My Mother'

one of the worst I've read.

Simplistic & rushed story that is not worthy of submission. Another retarded disciple of Samuelx.

i thought it was good, short is not bad, to the point great ending

had me turned on

... lots of it! Too rushed. No build up whatsoever. Clearly the work of an amateur.

It was ok. It works. Could have been better. I do like the shortness but a little more eroticisme with the mom would have really helped me get off.

Maybe you should try doing something else with your time.

save people's time!

I really liked the story. Now I am waiting for the next chapters. Please try to be more descriptive about the sex scenes and try to make them a little bit more erotic from now on. His mum was forced to make sex with him, but actually enjoyed it, so make her act more whorish next time!

It was short. It had a plot. There was some sex. I think knowing of the "plan" would have been helpful. Dialogue is always a builder...if it is done correctly.

Did you explain how the Mother knew it was the son ?

My suggestion for this story is to let it fade.

You have enough talent to submit another story I am sure. Learn from this one.

reminds me of when I fucked my own mom

i think the ending could have been better to what could have been a great plot.

THIS WAS OUT AND OUT RAPE OF THE WORST KIND, A BOY RAPES HIS MOTHER. THAT IS THE BIGGEST TURN OFF EVER . RAPE NO MATTER TO WHO OR BY WHO.THIS BASTARD SHOULD BE HUNG. AS FOR THE END OF THIS STORY IT SUCKED. THERE WAS NO LOGIC AT ALL...........LAROC OF AGES

maybe the title was the best part. "The Fucking of My Mother." That's what lots of boys'd love to do, get their fat young prick up their own mother's cunt and blow their young balls up where they were once a baby. What's wrong with that? Up his mother's mommy-hole is where a boy's creamy sperm belongs.

Next time you rape your mother I hope you breed a baby up her hole!

I hope part two of this great story is in the works. :)

I agree with LAROC. No arousal here.

sexy

Not bad. When I was a kid my mom was drinking way to much and she would blackout then pass out cold sleeping and I would feel her up and I even had sex with her. She never woke up or moved a muscle the whole time. She was the first woman I have ever seen nude and felt. All of my sexual experiences were with my drunk mother. This is my real life absolutely true story. This was back in the 70s when I was able to experience sex with my drunk mother

@Laroc. Dude he planned it out, but obviously slipped up at some point lmao. Why else would she know? She found out and LET IT HAPPEN. That right there was consent. She could have stopped it when she found out. Yet she allowed her son to think his plan worked....if the party is willing it is not rape....some people can't think at all.