All Comments on 'Please'

This is so beautifully written. I felt the doubt, the fear, the passion, and the pleasure. Makes me want to know more...who is he? What happens when she wakes up in his arms? Please write more. Thank you Elle.

You're doing very well and hope you continue as you are a good writer. Your writing is far better than the indicated age group in your bio- very discerning and mature. Thank you for the entertainment.

Totally need more of this. PLEASE.

I feel as though I should be paying to read this. Terrific in everyway. I have so many questions, who is he, how does he know her, why doesn't she seem to know him,ect. Questions that can only be answered by a second chapter! Great Work!

You have to continue this wow!!!

Five stars.

Please keep it going!!

i liked this story. i like reluctant acceptance/gentle force.

where he knows what she needs and gives it to her. of course

this is fantasy, so everything is kosher. but in real life.....

she is overwhelmed, submits, and finds pleasure in his taking.

definitely would read more...so hopefully elledee will be

writing chapter 2. TY

A great example of role playing. Great work thus far, give us more!

I searched high and low for this to reread it. It's just so good!

That was so well written, I felt it