Fucking Cold

nice one.

Great turn of events!

Nice job

good luck in the contest.

Naked Hazing

Loved your concept. More dialogue and desciption of the sex would have made it perfect for me. And the suggestion of a video tape of the event at the end. Great job incorporatng Nude Day into the story. Good luck!

A Delight

It's so nice to see a story by you. I like your slightly off plumb sense of humor in your writing. Your story was fun, interesting, and erotic. Congratulations, and thanks for entering the Nude Day Contest!

wow

i liked this one the title fits it very well lol

A cute, inoffensive little ditty with a nice little head twist at the end. I enjoyed how you tread lightly on the whole nude day thing, using an entirely different conceit to get these kids together naked. Still you struck with the basic structure of these (let's call them unexpectedly nude) lines of stories by putting two naked strangers together and let the sexual energy burn. The male subject clearly longed for something more (i.e., sex), but the story turned mostly on the inherent discomfort of finding oneself nude in an unexpected place with an equally nude stranger.

It I were to ask you to focus on anything in the future, it would be to let that awkwardness work itself through on its own terms. Imagine you in a situation in which you are forced to be nude. Now you find you are not alone, and a beautiful woman is in the same position (figuratively speaking). To me, the story is in the slow surrender to the inevitable. the incremental steps from shock and modesty to adjustment and acceptance. Maybe a little lost ground here and there and along the way. Then comes the sex.

And this is not directed to this writer, who, thankfully, didn't use this cheap trick. It's the absence of the trick in the story I want to point out. Two tricks, actually. First, let's forbid our fictional counterparts from trying to convince woman that nudity is OK because "You've got a great body! You shouldn't hide from anyone." And in just moments this former virginal ingenue is frolicking naked as if . . . .well, as if she was born that way.

Hey, maybe I"m wrong. Women, you tell me. If you found yourself at a nudist beach, would that work? Would it be enough to get you out of our clothes if he (whoever "he" is) just told you, "you have a great body. Nothing to be ashamed of." Would that be enough to make you comfortable?

And one more thing, which, once again, this writer didn't do, for which I am grateful. Let's pledge never to have a naked person ask another, "Do you like what you see?" upon stripping. What does that accomplish, anyway? Fight the urge to resort to all cliché's. Bring in reinforcements to fight these urges if necessary. We may even need to raise an army to defeat cliche. We could get Stanley McChrystal to lead it. I hear he's not busy these days.

very neat.

I think it could have done with a more rounded, less hasty, ending by a nice little story.

Interesting story

I suppose that in their situation, playing strip poker would have been a waste of time. Good luck on the contest.

entertaining

pranking maybe but do not think it would be called hazing... heck of a tail