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Wings of Fate Ch. 02

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by Anonymous06/28/10

interesting

you have my interesting peaked looking forward to seeing where this goes

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by Anonymous06/28/10

Good story line

I like your story, and I'm looking forward to seeing what you do with it. I do think you'd do better to put your story in the past tense instead of the present tense. It makes it easier to for your readers to understand. Keep up your work!

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