This is one of the hottest stroke stories I've ever read. :)
The story could still use a bit of 'fleshing up' in a manner of speaking.
It would be wonderful if we had a bit of backstory on the two characters, it gives them a more rounded feel.
Excellent!!
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Anonymous01/02/11
nice story bt need sme improvement
Nice story i am a young girl of age 19 and ths story really make me feel wet bt i thnk writer shld include sem detail lyk hw mom tken such a bold decision of doing lesb incest with daughter in such a rapid manner etc
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Anonymous03/14/11
was ok
was a good story till you started calling her mommy, i have never in my life heard a full grown adult call thier mother mommy or dad daddy
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Anonymous03/15/11
Loved It
My adult daughter still calls me daddy and her mom, mommy...especially when she cumming...
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You start in 1st person of the mom, then go to 1st person of the son. Then back again. Which is it?????
What story
were you reading? It's not her son. It's her daughter and the entire story was written in the 1st person as the daughter.
I liked it, by the way.
Don't make us wait.
Please write Ch. 2 soon!
A Touch Random At Times
…but still quite hot. More, please.
Decent
The story has nothing but sex. It needs some pre and post time.
Gr8
Nice story. had my cock up from beginning to end
Dammmm..wow,haha i'm always just taken aback by these erotic stories.haha i wish they were my neighbors!
Hot!!
This is one of the hottest stroke stories I've ever read. :)
The story could still use a bit of 'fleshing up' in a manner of speaking.
It would be wonderful if we had a bit of backstory on the two characters, it gives them a more rounded feel.
Excellent!!
nice story bt need sme improvement
Nice story i am a young girl of age 19 and ths story really make me feel wet bt i thnk writer shld include sem detail lyk hw mom tken such a bold decision of doing lesb incest with daughter in such a rapid manner etc
was ok
was a good story till you started calling her mommy, i have never in my life heard a full grown adult call thier mother mommy or dad daddy
Loved It
My adult daughter still calls me daddy and her mom, mommy...especially when she cumming...
Please write some more.
Bad chapter
Its not realistic and it lacks imagination
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