The story ended in an odd place. I thought that maybe the next page had not loaded correctly, but this seems to be the end of this tale? I am willing to read further. Please continue. I would ask that in future you end the story having them part or some such. Please continue to write.
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Anonymous06/28/10
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Yea wat happened very weird endding would like more
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The story ended in an odd place. I thought that maybe the next page had not loaded correctly, but this seems to be the end of this tale? I am willing to read further. Please continue. I would ask that in future you end the story having them part or some such. Please continue to write.
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Yea wat happened very weird endding would like more
more more more
please
do you know the metric system?
5 feet 5 inches and 132 pounds is a trim woman of medium height. Especially for a Japanese girl she is far from diminutive.
Second Verse Same as the First
This is a good read but it needs to be followed -up on
to leave it un - Finished would be wrong.
Where is the rest of it?
Excellent start! But we need the rest of the story.
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