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First Time with Phil

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous08/19/11

so lucky

I love this... I want my first time to be so wonderful! i sooo want cock xxx

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by mumblegooseegg07/09/12

Not up to your usual standard

The start of the story is VERY confusing, partly I believe because there are so many basic punctuation errors. One cardinal rule: When one person stops talking and another one starts, you MUST start a new paragraph. I got so discouraged with the effort to understand who was saying what and what story elements the narrator brought in that I gave up after about three paragraphs.

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by burnie443407/13/13

Good story, but spelling and grammar mistakes made it hard to follow. The experience was much the same as my first. Believe it or not, it was with a guy named Phil

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