All Comments on 'The Awakening of Ellen Ch. 02'

Well, at seven years between chapters, I fear that I shall not live long enough to read chapter three. At that interval between chapters, I also fear that the author, unless a teen will not live to complete ten chapters . Come on complete the god damned story or abandon it before Ellen is sent to a rest home and her sexuality will be changed as to whether she shits herself without a Depends on.

is the next part omg this is hot

The possibilites are endless with this one!

You can write! Most of the stuff on Literotica is pure adulterated crap written by functionaly illiterate scribblers,but you have the gift. Suggest you incorporate more dialogue which can be dramatic and stimulating,check the great Elmore Leonard as a sublime example.

Very erotic, we don, t share the same eroticism as Ellen and Robert.I, ll just save this for my fantasy. Perhaps you are favorite author material!

Truly a loving wife to be proud of.