All Comments on 'A Morning to Remember'

... and exceptionally poor editing, if you did any at all. Re-write badly needed.

Why do people continue to BASH and BADMOUTH a story or writer, but don't have the BALLS to put their name! They have to hide behind an anonymous....

Yes, there were a few areas that needed polishing and editing, but this wasn't that bad of a story...there have been ALOT worse on here lately....

Good first effort...look forward to reading chapter two

Just for the record, if your going to badmouth someone, make sure your own grammer is 100%.

"lousy writing"... talk about poor grammer!!!

Ironically, it's spelled "grammar." Unless you do wish to talk about "grammer!!!"... maybe Kelsey Grammer?

Just to avoid confusion I am not the previous anon author and remain anon for personal reasons only. I like the basis of the story but the grammatical, punctuation and spelling errors detracted from the basic enjoyment as I found myself correcting it as I read it! Guess that's what happens when your parents are both teachers lol. Over all though with some editing and the use of a spell checker a great story. xXx

Fuck all of you who criticize anons in here. I used to post criticism of stories via my account. Guess what? Other readers took to sending me nasty PM's because of it.

So, fuck you.

I haven't posted in a while, but last time I did there was an option to ignore anonymous comments. If we all used that it would keep the trolls away.

Mediocre at best.

The spelling and grammar are atrocious.