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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous06/29/10

Nice

That was actually really, really nice. I'm impressed! Thank you author.

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by Anonymous06/29/10

wow

not a borring happy couple story. Great job , dude!

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by Chagrined06/29/10

A loving wife/husband

Well done. You could visualize this happening to couples all over the world, I hope!

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by sexmate06/29/10

Real Nice!

I enjoyed it!

Thanks for a wonderful read!

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by louguy3506/29/10

A nice variation!

Well done, CSJ. It is refreshing to read about two normal married people in a real relationship.

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by Pistolpackinpete06/29/10

Thankfully it required little intellect....

....to read Eileen's thoughts! Despite the disconnect between cuddling and what she really wanted(which was a switch from the usual, "All you ever think about is sex, what about MY needs"!!) and the silly remark about orgasm time thanks for the offering.

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by Anonymous06/29/10

Not here

What exactly is supposed to be erotic about "two normal married people in a real relationship" ??? Where's the fantasy? This boring just-like-home stuff doesn't belong here - although I suppose it might sneak into the 'Romance' section. But preferably leave it to Barbara Cartland.

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by Anonymous07/03/10

One Star, Booring

Stick this story in the wastebasket of non-erotic stories.

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