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Not bad...
kind of generic though. Good writing though; I'm sure with a little imagination, you could make some good stuff.
good start
but the story isn't finished.
this is hot
great storie hope to read more
Very nice...
... but feels half-finished. You could have continued with that story a little bit, or at least reworded the ending to not sound like a prologue. Other than that, it was very entertaining, and I hope you write more, regardless of it being a sequel or a new story.
ditto
pt2 to wrap it up
want more
I agree with the other comments that say that the story is a good start but needs more. I can think of several ways to continue. We need to see if she is pregnant, we need to see if the plant wants or can get other females, we need to see what will happen if she is not pregnant. What kind of offspring will she have. Can the plant make her give cuttings to other people?
More pleassseeee...
need more
We need to know more
More please!
love this story, but I agree with the other comment. Another chapter would be great. Does the plant succeed? Does she birth another plant to go off and find a "lover" of it's own? Hope there's more coming :)
I like it!
hope u can make more stories that will make my panties wet
thanks
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