Very enjoyable fantasy, which turned out refreshingly different from what I was expecting. Strong in its dialogue and convincing in its detail. Nice - piece of writing, Tx.
Some much detail none of which distracted. What a build to an incredible ending and a huge desire for more. Great story. Real like the "other couple" as well you turned them into something more than in the normal stories. Thanks!
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Anonymous07/17/10
fantastic!
A truly fantastic story. It had me hard from the beginning and never let up. ANY chance of continuing the plot line? I'd like to "see" the results!
I gotta be honest...I very nearly bailed on this story halfway thru page one because it was taking so long to develop, but im very glad I didn't!
I love 'girl next door' types especially when they have flat chests, big nipples and firm round asses, and your heroine did not disappoint.
I felt like I needed to consult an anatomy text or the kama sutra to visualize some of the positions they were in inside the playhouse, but the fucking action was hot and the emotion of best friends turned lovers was sincere.
Enjoyed the tale Tex, and the little twist at the end was a nice addition. Agree with the comments about having a hard time truly trying to visualize the positions inside such tight cramped quarters, but whatever the hell position they were in, the sex itself was hot and exciting.
well written, humorous in the right places and very sexy. I really enjoyed reading it.
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Anonymous11/03/11
Good
story. You change the pace so well. Keep on writing. You're one of the people I am trying to learn from, even when there isn't much explicit sex, which clearly was 'not' the case here.
I am new to this kind of writing, and really enjoyed this story. I thought your pacing and how you expressed it in dialog was very nice. I want to learn to do this.
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Anonymous05/27/13
neighbors join in.
Wonderful story. Noe have a pool party with neighbors
I have a best friend like that too that I don't want to ruin the relationship with feelings. We've talked about it and we chose to stay friends just incase though.
Fun with sizzling sex scenes. The author is a master.
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Anonymous06/10/16
Jizzy 😜
Man, u nailed it again. Awesome.
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Anonymous10/13/16
Cheating
The main character has a girlfriend. This means hes a cheating scumbag. Since this story was not flagged for cheating it automatically gets a 1/5.
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Anonymous11/26/16
Nothing Beats Sex With A Friend
A great story. Although the details were nowhere near the same, it reminded me of my friend coming over once when I came home sick from work. And we wound up having sex for the first time. Great story. Worthy of 5 stars.
English
Something Different
That was certainly a different scenario with some literally and figuratively hot sex.
Sequel
And we are getting a sequel right?
Hot.hot.hot
hot, steamy, dirty, nasty, sex! Gotta love it. More please
Well Done
I liked it, I really did. Best of luck to you in the contest.
DG
Awesome
Please make a part 2. Please. Please. Great job!
That was...
...simply awesome. Best of luck to you!
Great
Best of luck to you, a well-deserved 5.
Part 2?
I'm hoping for a second part to this story, just like many others I suspect.
Nice Work
Great imagination and timing
Don't you DARE leave us hanging
This story demands a sequel! Sexy pool party, sharing the girls. More!
Great story
One of the best Nude Day stories I've read. Good luck in the contest.
Almost Caught
Great story, well written, good plot development, well done.
Hot and Heartfelt
Very enjoyable fantasy, which turned out refreshingly different from what I was expecting. Strong in its dialogue and convincing in its detail. Nice - piece of writing, Tx.
MORE!!!!
you need to continue this storyline!!!
Well done
Some much detail none of which distracted. What a build to an incredible ending and a huge desire for more. Great story. Real like the "other couple" as well you turned them into something more than in the normal stories. Thanks!
fantastic!
A truly fantastic story. It had me hard from the beginning and never let up. ANY chance of continuing the plot line? I'd like to "see" the results!
worth the wait!
I gotta be honest...I very nearly bailed on this story halfway thru page one because it was taking so long to develop, but im very glad I didn't!
I love 'girl next door' types especially when they have flat chests, big nipples and firm round asses, and your heroine did not disappoint.
I felt like I needed to consult an anatomy text or the kama sutra to visualize some of the positions they were in inside the playhouse, but the fucking action was hot and the emotion of best friends turned lovers was sincere.
very well written.
I give it one big cock, straight up!
Well done...
Enjoyed the tale Tex, and the little twist at the end was a nice addition. Agree with the comments about having a hard time truly trying to visualize the positions inside such tight cramped quarters, but whatever the hell position they were in, the sex itself was hot and exciting.
Once again...a good read. Thank you
awesome story
You write so well --- i enjoy all your work
Amazing!
That was one of the best stories ive read on literotiaca!!!
Very Nice
This is the first story I have read of your's. I'm impressed. I think I'll read a few more.
Richard
Very Good Story
well written, humorous in the right places and very sexy. I really enjoyed reading it.
Good
story. You change the pace so well. Keep on writing. You're one of the people I am trying to learn from, even when there isn't much explicit sex, which clearly was 'not' the case here.
THIS COULD BE THE START OF SOMETHING GRAND
old friends become better and deeper. TK U MLJ LV NV
WOW!
Surely one of the most downright sexy stories on the site! Just simply a SIZZLER!! MORE of those would work!!!
Really enjoyed it!
I am new to this kind of writing, and really enjoyed this story. I thought your pacing and how you expressed it in dialog was very nice. I want to learn to do this.
neighbors join in.
Wonderful story. Noe have a pool party with neighbors
You have to stand for something
...and I was erect through most if this tale.
#2 SUMMER FUN BETWEEN SEMESTERS
oldies become goodies, TK U MLJ LV NV
:-)
It put a big smile on my face.
what a lame story
so much wrong with this lame tale
10/10
I have a best friend like that too that I don't want to ruin the relationship with feelings. We've talked about it and we chose to stay friends just incase though.
That teenage sex was really hot.
I am so old it is hard for me to remember, LOL.
This story was...
nostalgic, and fun, and verrrry hot (and well written, too, of course)!
one thing though
Aureole is a halo of light surrounding a religious person in a painting. Breasts have an areola.
Sweet take
I really enjoyed this sweet little tale. Kudos!
Great story
Great story! Very hot! I would love to read a sequel
Five *
Bloody good.
very hot and sexy even if cramped.
Looking forward to reading the continued story.
Other point of view
Liked the story. Maybe for another nude day you can write it from the point of view of the couple in the pool.
Excellent!
A super story. A unique point of view. Well done.
5 stars
Fun with sizzling sex scenes. The author is a master.
Jizzy 😜
Man, u nailed it again. Awesome.
Cheating
The main character has a girlfriend. This means hes a cheating scumbag. Since this story was not flagged for cheating it automatically gets a 1/5.
Nothing Beats Sex With A Friend
A great story. Although the details were nowhere near the same, it reminded me of my friend coming over once when I came home sick from work. And we wound up having sex for the first time. Great story. Worthy of 5 stars.
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