All Comments on 'Zane Ch. 01'

Good god this story is going to be HOT!

Can't wait to read more! :)

I never got the feel that she wants an agressive man. It seems more like he wants a sex slave. Maybe this should have went in the nonconsent catergory?

cant wait to read more. Zane sounds really hot

Just a little information, I am the rich shade of pure cocoa powder and when I blush it is clearly visible.

wow i rly like it i hope you have not gave up on it

Good story, Great start. Looking forward to more.

Your writing sucks.... Its horrible grammar, grammar, grammar

I loved the characters. The heroine seemed extremely well delineated. Very tense & sexy.

The only thing that would stink is if you listened to rabid commentators who lack kindergarden level courtesy and clearly have no self-respect.

Oh, and anonymous commentators can't be trusted. Anyone not smart enough to complete a free Lit registration can't be relied on for constructive or honest criticism.

Don't let them get you down.

the chemistry with these two is amazing. I like how her bad streak has ended and now she can possibly live a normal life with a man that may love her for who she is...