The grammar and spelling should be checked.
Sweet story. I hope i find love like this one day. It is hard.
I liked this story despite its shortest. It was indeed love at first sight. Is it possible to blow up a story that begins as this has into a longer more complex communication?
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The grammar and spelling should be checked.
Sweet story. I hope i find love like this one day. It is hard.
nice story, happy ending
I liked this story despite its shortest. It was indeed love at first sight. Is it possible to blow up a story that begins as this has into a longer more complex communication?
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