Doc Ch. 01

Good Start

Looking for more chapters.

Good start

Keep it comming

Not enough

There was not enough there to know whether I liked it or not. Briefest of character development. This being in Novels and Novellas, if subsequent chapters are this abbreviated we will soon lose interest.

VERY nice!

Can't wait for further chapters! :)

Nice Start

Good start and a realistic look at todays society. Keep up the good work

Just had a chance to read this

Great start. I would like you to give yourself a big pat on the back for me. This was a good story. Kudos to your editors as well.

promising beging

this was a promising begining but too short by far imho, i gave it a 3 star only because of that since there wasnt enough to judge higher.

i thought to give it only 1 star; but after reading the complete series i realised it must accrue 5 star at the least.

You know: It is possible two write more than half a page per chapter ...

oh so true

The laws and the press seem to care more for the criminals than the victims anymore. You sure did a great job of getting that across in your story.

great story

Wish that you would finish it. thanks for the read.

doc ch1

it started off good but only 1/2 dozen lines it took me longer to write this comment then to read it. I will read the others and vote but will not comment again until the end.
Ed Grocott
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