All Comments on 'Doc Ch. 02'

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gdk38gdk38over 13 years ago
oh yes

this is really getting interesting, thank you for the effort, keep up the good work, galem

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
interesting

Very good start can't wait to read more

gunnycdcgunnycdcover 13 years ago
Marines

as a retired Marine, I was wondering how you were going to explain a medic with the Marine Recon Team. Very good explanation. But I have never heard of a Marine being a doc, even in Forced Recon.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
rushed and to easily accepted

If you detailed out and gave the reader a more insightful view of the character s feelings then this chapter would be perfect it lacks a certain realistic quality that you'd experience in that situation but great read this is my second in 2 or 3 yrs

BuzzCzarBuzzCzarover 2 years ago

Slow down, breathe, write some words. It’s not a race.

cpleggarcpleggaralmost 2 years ago

marines dont have medicka the navy supplys corpsman

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Great page be good if there were two in the chapter.

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