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by Anonymous

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by gdk3807/03/10

oh yes

this is really getting interesting, thank you for the effort, keep up the good work, galem

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by Anonymous07/04/10

interesting

Very good start can't wait to read more

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by gunnycdc08/13/10

Marines

as a retired Marine, I was wondering how you were going to explain a medic with the Marine Recon Team. Very good explanation. But I have never heard of a Marine being a doc, even in Forced Recon.

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by Anonymous06/02/14

rushed and to easily accepted

If you detailed out and gave the reader a more insightful view of the character s feelings then this chapter would be perfect it lacks a certain realistic quality that you'd experience in that situation but great read this is my second in 2 or 3 yrs

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