Doc Ch. 03

loved it and want more

more more

It's a good story....though wondering if you'll tell us what happened to send him back in time other than a flash of light. I especially like the real history you put in. Are you a history teacher or someone who just knows alot about history? It is a bit confusing where he is on the family tree but I like the plot alot.

to smart and less informed

Your making your characters to smart and there is no real show of emotion math wasn't all that understandable for average people back then so how does grams understand it so readily also Clay is "thinking" to much show his lack of knowledge more add some confusion even some frustration if he and you doesn't know something in detail then show it don't cover it with a shear blanket covered in glider and holes it's flashy not practical