This wouldn't feel so strange if it were stand-alone. But because it follows the first story, it makes me wonder what happened to make Ben so cruel. Others would probably disagree, but if this is part of an ongoing series, I didn't enjoy it.
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Wow. Jarring after reading the first one.
This wouldn't feel so strange if it were stand-alone. But because it follows the first story, it makes me wonder what happened to make Ben so cruel. Others would probably disagree, but if this is part of an ongoing series, I didn't enjoy it.
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