All Comments on 'Helene's First Time'

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H.H.MorantH.H.Morantalmost 14 years ago
It never fails

<p class=MsoNormal>“His cock entered just so far and then stopped, coming up

against her hymen.”<o:p></o:p></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><span style="mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;</span><o:p></o:p></p>

<p class=MsoNormal>Everywhere else in the world the hymen is located at the ENTRANCE of the

vagina &#8211; not even a little bit inside.<span style="mso-spacerun:

yes">&nbsp; </span>Another cliché we could have done without is that of the

multiorgasmic virgin.<o:p></o:p></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><![if !supportEmptyParas]>&nbsp;<![endif]><o:p></o:p></p>

<p class=MsoNormal>Other than these bits &#8211; which seem to be a required disassociation

with reality &#8211; not a bad story although<span style="mso-spacerun:

yes">&nbsp; </span>Helene’s stamina is remarkable, as is Freddie’s. That she isn’t too sore to walk afterwards

is likewise remarkable.<o:p></o:p></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><![if !supportEmptyParas]>&nbsp;<![endif]><o:p></o:p></p>

<p class=MsoNormal>I liked the ending, although Helene could have been more

remarkable than just “looking happy”<o:p></o:p></p>

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Yeah, it never fails, but still . . .

Commenter's points are true, technical is important, so remember. BUT this is a terrific story, of a girl who finally takes charge and then moves on. I'd like to hear more of her sexual adventures. Not Helene does Dallas, but how she gets on at State. She seems strong and willing to learn. My kinda woman, especially the small breasts.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
computer scientists are losers?!? 1 star for you, dipshit.

That's all.

KingCuddleKingCuddlealmost 3 years ago

LOVE WOMEN WHO ARE CLEAR ABOUT WHAT THEY WANT!!!

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