All Comments on 'Queen Penelope's Memoirs'

wow

What the FUCK?

Although I feel sorry for excalibur, I am looking forward to more.

this writer is a pscho. should be in a mental hospital

What the fuck did i just read?

That's just disturbing

Its amazing i liked it really. can you write another part of this one?

I THOUGHT THIS WAS POORLY WRITTEN-HURRIED-NO DETAILS--NO REAL STORYLINE--I KNOW SOMEONE IS BETTER ON THIS SITE

This was near enough to do the trick but do write a story about a man in a male chastity cage who somehow finds the key and has been masturbating. His wife finds out but he doesn't know. She decides to make him chaste for good.

He is still so proud to be her slave that he accepts the new situation and becomes the perfect cuckold.

A better ending would be for him to leave and then sneak back and kill the queen.

This story will haunt me for the rest of my life. Fiction or not.

So just months later he's thin and weakened with a high feminine voice.. nope wrong.

Castration would take years to have much physical effect and it would not be anywhere near so drastic on the body. Also a man who is castrated after puberty will never change voice, it stays just the same.

This is some truly fucked shit

One of the worst writers on this site.

NEVER WRITE AGAIN.

What does one person see in another?

The Characters represent two cultural ikons: Penelope, the faithful wife of Odysseus and Excalibur, the sword of King Arthur who attempted to hold back the darkness in the dying throes of Roman civilization. Having run away from the palace, Princess Penelope encounters Excalibur in bathing in a pond.

In the chance encounter, both find themselves among nature in the the natural state. She sees him as "the most beautiful man I had ever seen. With a perfect, chiseled body, like a Greek God, big broad shoulders, strong manly hands and long wavy blond hair. His physique was exquisite and I found myself breathing heavy." To him she is truly an angel.

After robust love-making in the wild, they are apprehended by the Queens guards who return Penelope to her high station, but bring him before the Queen for punishment as a rebel. Thus, he stands tall as a man, he shrinks from the punishment: Castration and Slavery.

Months later, Excalibur is brought before the court in a debilitated condition thin, weak and pale clad in a woman's robe. Ordered to disrobe Excalibur reveals a pubis shorn of genitalia. Hunched over trembling with fear, Excalibur acknowledges having learnt his lesson. Given the choice between return to the rebel camp or slavery, Excalibur ends up old to a brothel.

Up makes an interesting point through an extreme example. Coming across a former lover, one pauses to wonder what did I see in that person. In Up's words: " the man I'd fallen in love with didn't seem so desirable. In fact, I found myself also laughing along with the crowd."

Read Memoirs.

An Interesting Allegory

Queen Penelope collects a number of interesting real - life observations: the rebelliousness of youth represented by her youthful self, running from the palace and her attraction and consorting with a traitor. The lack of constancy among the youth: Penelope at one point worships Excalibur as a God and later laughs when he is taken away to be castrated.

Men do not escape Queen's scorn. Quite willing to give his life for the cause, Excalibur faces emasculation with terror, even refusing to be returned to his rebel compatriots.