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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous11/28/06

Surprise Surprise

I'm close to shocked to find some evidence
of craftmanship here.

Once again, it's obvious the poem
was rushed to market.

It does have potential and ignited
a spark if not a flame.

andy

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by Senna Jawa11/30/06

andy's BS

Bullshit, andy. As before. You're not equipped as a reader or poet to get even one third of what this poem offers, which means that you're not really getting anything. Give up on your posturing.

All images etc. are natural, but they are beyond you. The whole poem is beyond you, as witnessed by your comment here (and elsewhere too).

BTW, this poem and several other of my poems here, at Literotica archive, has a messed up format (Literotica's fault). I don't have energy to fix all this mess.

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