All Comments on 'life is a private party'

original and unique, I did enjoy your write, if you need help fixing your signature, let me know...thanks ..Art

i love your use of sparse language, you make it sound FULL and the images i conjure up because of your writing, are vivid. this is a poem i can read many times (as i have already) and gain enjoyment each time. i like how you have used white space. i am learning to like the lack of punctuation, it seems to open the boundaries for reading. i am intrigued by the last few lines as to who is saying what. the tone changes with the two different approaches and i can't decide whether i like his slight cynical tone or her 'down the nose' tone. excellent reading, thank you. you've taught me many things in this one poem.