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Good story....
I liked it. He got rid of the whore and kept his money and his balls. Beautiful.
Pretty good . . . .
This was not bad. But I wonder if Annie was trying to get pregnant as "insurance?" This would prevent him from dumping her . . . Another scenario could have been for our "hero" to simply walk in with the shotgun and kill all three of them. In most states, a person has the right to use lethal force in his own home when confronted by deadly force (i.e., two armed bad guys). Killing the wife would be an accidental killing while defending against a crime. Again, in many states, the death of a bystander shot by "accident" would be charged to the individuals committing the felony. The logic is that the bystander would not have been shot had the crime not been committed in the first place. See this description in the California Law Review, http://www.jstor.org/pss/3478360, if you don't believe me. And no, I'm not a lawyer or a cop. And I don't condone the above -- I would have called the police, just like hero did. But it is just a story, after all . . .
GOOD STORY
I thought this was one of your better stories. well written and a good story line. i really like most of the stories you wriyr. i have not read all of them yet, but the ones I have read are all good except one. The one story that disappointed me was ELISE AND ROD. I wish you would write a sort of continuation to that story to tell us what might have happened after the fact. Again, good writing.
irrational mindless crap;
The husband has just found out is wife is deeply invovled with other men to have him beaten and MURDERED.. . in addition to cheating
so she offers him DINNER and he decides to eat the Dinner ??? Hello posion control ???
when the SWAT team shows up... while the cunt whore woife is fucking other men... what do they all do??? put their clothes back ON? and re-tie her up?....
Now trapped by the police the two men agree with the wife's plan for her to be rescued by SWAT as the Innocent victim while they go to jail for 10-20 years?
this is Jutst absurd ... and what is even worse are the number of readers who dont see these glaring plot holes
OK story but ...
death sentence for kidnapping? What planet do you live on JPB? A lot of places won't execute you even if you commit first degree murder. My personal complaint about driving her away is that we never get a sense of getting even. As far as we know she is a couple states away, hooked up to a rich guy, and living the high life. Getting even isn't complete until we know the person suffered/is suffering. She really screwed him by wantonly fooling around on him, planning to rip him off, and planning to have him KILLED! You're letting a clod blooded murderess walk away here. Not really satisfying. The guys in prison mean almost nothing.
I agree with Hawkeye.
It was good story for a change, JPB. I gave it the good score it deserved and not the usual ONE (1) that you normally get.
Bob get down from those flatirons....
...and get your ass in a hypobaric chamber before it's too late.Oops!! Too late. Oh yeah, the barroom was in Rhode Island.
hypobaric - hyperbaric
...who cares.
Best of luck with the dictionary/thesaurus/abacus.
Can you actually spell your own name?
Just as I thought you were becoming less objectionable you have to revert to type. Shame!
Good Story
But Annie his wife got off entirely too lightly. Remember she tried to have him killed. If I was Rob I would make sure that she got either caught and served time or maybe a nice accident could happen to her. He should have had her followed by the PI when she left the house. He could then show up and take everything that she took with her leaving her with nothing...not even a stich of clothing.
Curiasshole, what would a "hyper" baric chamber be doing in the mountains....
....you stupid arrogant nitwit. Maybe if I'd referenced bob's scuba gear you'd have a point but as usual you think you've scored when your just a bit shy of clever. I will plead guilty to misremembering the locale, it was Fall River, the movie starred Jodie Lesbo.
But I will try to turn over a new leaf since the new medication arrived.
....so sorry for the outburst?
pistolpackingignoramus
Hyperbaric chambers are used for the treatment of multiple sclerosis, not just in diving. There are a few in mountain areas of Scotland. I'm not saying they work, just that enough MS people believe they work to invest in them. In mountainous and other places.
a good story about a lucky guy
Most Jake's would have been shot in the head in his basement while the poor wife was being treated for being tied up and abused.
All she would have is the insurance check she would get.
Thanks for the good story
Scotsman Douchebag....
I don't care if decompression chambers cure the common cold and enable you to live off the jizz you swallow the point I made still stands you insult to my ancestors.There was nothing ignorant in the statement I made.You can't say the same.
Entertaining Fantasy
What he was dealing with was the problem of dividing his coin collection and the rest of his estate with her in the divorce and his strategy took care of that very nicely. Personally I put living well in front of vengeance.
Or did he have someone tail her and bury her in the desert?
Actually I liked this one, a lot.
It was very intreaging right up to the end. My compliments to the writer.
With the shotgun he could have gone for a threefer when they were fucking and sucking....
Just trying to save his poor wife. Alas! Oh woe is me.......
Well done
Better then your usual fare. This was a motive which, while criminal, was understandable.
One big hole
Who left the initial pictures and why didn't they leave them again?
Obviously someone was working on his behalf in the sidelines. I suppose, after the first installment, they could just quit, but...
How did i miss this one ?
Thought I read all of Bob 's work. This is one of the times it's good to be wrong.
Great story
You're amazingly prolific. Some better than others. This one was definitely in the better category. Thanks for all you do, JPB.
good story
Good character development. Great walk through of rational of main character as he sorts through the problems. I wish there would have been more dialogue but the story carried anyway. Good job, JPB. Very enjoyable.
Excellent
What a cunt. The lowest form of cheating whore skank slut that exists. My only regret is not reading about her dead disease filled body discovered in a Mexican whore house. Luckily the husband found out. Great tale.
Very clever way to get rid of a wife!
Nice story overall. Good to see it didn't cost him anything to get rid of the bitch. I wonder where she ended up? In a trailer park I bet!
Why
The revenge part is so short in stories like this? No details of the offenders' sufferings? At least the males.
NICE
Finally a mans story. One that didn't let the whore wife get anything, as it should be. I wish you could have expressed a little bit better as to how the other two ended up after the information was given to the other wives. and what finally happened to the whore he married. Ya know, like the police finding her, and her having a hell-of-a-time in prison. but what the hell....... But still was worth reading this one. which was a lot better than the story about the spineless bastard who enjoyed his wife gang banging all those black guys. ( 4 stars ). I have known you to write better stories though.
Wow
Just wow.
Nice Story
I only have one problem with it. That is the fact that he shared the info about his coin collection with her at all. Yeah, she was his wife but the coins were a family heirloom passed down for generations. Maybe after 30 or 40 years I may have clued her in on
it, but it would have taken a while. Like I said, it was a generations-old family secret.
Then again, maybe it's me and my "trust issues " rearing their ugly head again.
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