A Teacher's Way Out of a Dilemma Ch. 01

Interesting Start

Looking forward to Chapter 2.

Good premise-don't forget her feelings...

This story will be hotter if you take the time to show she has conflicting emotions-it seems she just made the call to her husband without any conflict at all. Slow it down a bit and imagine what she and her husband might actually be thinking. That will make the sex scenes hotter.

the previous poster may well have a point

about this being made hotter by more attention being paid to the thoughts of the characters involved.

But I see some of that as being implicit already and look forward to where this goes next.

Great start

wanting more

GREAT

GREAT

being taken by a large black thick cock

brilliant story barb can't wait to read more awesome start. this has got my full attention in more ways than one.

very nice

i think your pacing of eroticism is very good. i don't think moral issues count at all, this is about sex. i think your personal thoughts have contributed to the story and it will be interesting to see how it develops.

Good start, I hope it's going to continue the same way.

It's a Good Start...

I think the pace of the story is fine and you have established the storyline within its context. Looking forward to Chapter 2.

Ready for Chapter 02

A good build up for what looks to be a promising hot story

Will have my wife to read at the same time, hopefully this will give her a real TURN ON. She has a liking for black stories