All Comments on 'Zane Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
So sexy!

Keep writing. Along with the hot sex I want to know how these two are going to handle their demons and make this twisted relationship work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

Love it! Love the chemistry.

missingit610missingit610over 13 years ago
Please continue...

There is so much more to this story and I'm hungry for more. Does Blair really leave? How will Zane handle her leaving? Does he go after her? Can u tell more about the characters? where is Zane's family?

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Please write more of their adventures

Well Done, author creates great chemistry. Love your work

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Loved it!

Can't wait to read more. There are just not enough stories like this. Keep it coming.

wenbiwenbiover 13 years ago
Great story

Loved the chemistry between Zane and Blair! Very hot story. More please.

THELOVELY1GLOTHELOVELY1GLOover 12 years ago
Dangggg

they just heat up the screen when I read about them. Just a few grammatical errors, other than that it is well written!!!

EuphoriaSlam69EuphoriaSlam69over 11 years ago
Now that's a way to fucking bust a cherry!

Hot and intense! OMG where can I find this Zane???

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
I agree with EuphoriaSlam 69

That's how you do it. This was like my first time (the sex, rather; not the other stuff).

chocolatesistachocolatesistaabout 10 years ago
I love this

So much, I can't seem to get enough and I know that this one of the many stories that I will come back to reread. Thank you for coming up with these characters and story.

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