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It is a good start though i felt like there should be more details or maybe answers...who were the men, why did they attack him? What made her go out on the balcony? did she hear something? why would he recognize her as his mate while badly wounded but not when he is lucid? even after kissing her or whatever he didn't realize it? What is she? I look forward to more so that we get some answers!
thanks
Nice start
The very first sentence in the story tells why she went to the balcony...cause she did hear something ;-) Liking this so far. Wondering why they didnt categorize this under Sci-Fi & Fantasy though. Very much looking forward to the next chapter :)
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LOVE IT
hmm
interesting and has so many options for where it goes
Different is good
This is only one of about three non-human or fantasy entries I've ever read on this site. Not sure why, because I really liked the other two and in my non-Lit life, I love sci-fi, fantasy and horror. Anyway, if I could find the time I'd probably change my reading habits. This was short, went down smooth and I love the fantasy aspect. Very good opening.
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