All Comments on 'Bound to My Mate Ch. 01'

Really great start to the story! Cannot wait for more! Keep up the fantastic work!

When you mentioned the name of the restaurant it all made sense. I wonder if it's Mr. Tall and Dark's intent to drive her insane and make her seek him out?

Great beginning, looking forward to more.

Please post more soon as I love this chapter so much and can't wait for more.

Wonderful beginning to something that I hope will take chapter after chapter to finish. It was amazing. Keep it up!

More please! Love where this is going, and I love Elizabeth. Smart and funny...Fun to read!

I enjoyed your story and look forward to much more.

i am looking forward to more of this story, its very interesting that Elizabeth didn't even get his name or for that matter the cop that pulled her over. *chuckles softly* i wonder if that was part of the plan with TDH.

Donna

There are so many questions left behind. Who is the guy? How does he know her name? Who is the cop who knows her name? Are they human? Will she see him. I wish you'd given us a bit more info in this first chapter. It could have been a bit longer. Overall, I do want to see the next chapter to get some answers. I hope it'll be out soon. Hope you give us more info in the next one.

Brilliant start - hope there's much more to come. Really loved it - will keep an eye out for the other chapters :)

Loved it !!! Can't wait for more and see how this progresses. Thank you.

I'm intrigued and a little freaked out but I liked this chapter. Looking forward to more from you.

One of the best stories I've read in a while. Strong characters, good description, and leaving us with a hook to come back for more. I look forward to seeing new chapters posted soon. Well done!

I like your story but I just don´t like the way you describe Elisabeth, taking pills, drinking alcohol together - she being a medicine doctor seems laughable or You just have no ideas what that means....

lol, was elisabeth talking to a chair or was there someone actually sitting there? im glad i decided to check this story out... you really have me intrigued

THIS is how to start a story...

As passionate as it could be. Perfect start for a werewolf story.

it seems odd that Elizabeth is a doctor yet at the end she abusing drugs.

I know too many doctors who abuse dugs. Ease of access.

Awsome story reading it for a 2nd time! Love it!

It just is amazing how all were stoies go the animals just take the women no mater what even if there with someone. And they say vampires are bad. Bull shit

I wanted to like this series a lot. I also have a compulsive need to finish any series; however, that need left me when I began reading Bound to my Mate. I read up to chapter 5 and I wanted to really like it. My biggest negative is Elizabeth. Her character is so weak. I know there are times when she takes control of her life and when she fights back but overall she's weak sauce and that annoys me. The story has a good plot and is well written despite a few grammatical mistakes. My only suggestion is to look at your writing style. There is something wonky about it. I was reading the story and couldn't get a real handle on the character or the plot. Yes, the series is over and my criticism is a little late but continue writing. I know you will continue to produce good results and always look for ways to improve your writing and your stories.

Some of these comments are so mean! Chill out people. Writing is hard, and every person is emotionally complex, and yes, just a little crazy. I've only read the first chapter, but i think you've captured something in Elizabeth that many other writers don't. Love it so far!

You remind of me an old girlfriend who was a physician

i'm reading your story again and i just spent every free second i had reading it the 1st time! you have a wonderful gift and talent in your writting! please write more!

Yes! I'm going to read this all this weekend. I just know it will be awesome. :)

My gosh, what a story!

I can't stop reading it (and I'm at work, so this is not a good thing), Poor girl, she hasn't been getting any for along time, and now this. Delishiously sexy and forbidden at the same time. The cop was a creep though, give her a break! Can't wait to see where you are going with this!

Sarai

Too many writers on this site jump into the sex and don't do justice to the little details that make a story interesting. I love your writing style! It makes the reader invest in the characters, not rush of blood the sexy scenes evoke!

Sexy as hell! I want to be taken like that!

It really is.

How do you at 28, go out with one man & spend the night lusting after another. I completely lost it by the restroom scene. I want to believe you, Hur Wolf, would have screamed if a man came into the women's rest room, talkless hold you in one.

All in all a cool plot as fantasies go, but please give your little warnings like you usually did in slave of the servants for normally not wise decisions or some thing.

@Baron2Shy, wait till you find your mate... *S* You will know then how you end up not screaming when they come into the wrong bathroom after you, or draw your attention while out on a blind date... All I can say is been there and done that for both events... Some people are just meant to be together...

@DoctorWolf, Having read all of the chapters of BTMM, all I can say is I hope your writing another few dozen "books" to go along with it... *S* I have read it from end to end about a dozen times, and keep waiting for more to see where the pack goes over time, especially with all the new wolves...

Don't know which nth time this is that I've read it, but it never fails to please. I just wish I could vote all over again.

Re: some of the recent qualms about the bathroom scene: Fiction, right? Calling for the suspension of disbelief? Elizabeth herself is horrified (while fascinated) that she let the mystery man have his way with her. It's not as if she thinks it was either normal or acceptable, just compelling...irresistible. And now she's sweating bullets over what it might mean. And to find out...of course...we have to keep reading!

Mmm, so far, she feels slutty and irresponsible.

That bathroom scene is probably one of my favorite from the whole story. I love that your girls aren't super sexualized (overly exposed to sex or super amazing at all things sexual right off the bat). They grow in their sexuality. What they like, what they don't, that's all live and learn. The chemistry is great all around and for anyone the least bit submissive, this story kicks ass as well as SttS. In summation, DoctorWolf kicks ass. I hate I don't have these in one continuous story on my tablet so I could read it as soon as I get a craving for it (which is often).

-onyx

I have been desperately trying to find this story for a while now, and I am not sure whether it has been removed from the site or not. Please if anyone knows which story this is, can you please let me know.

This is all I can remember about the story:

werewolves, Dominic Masters (alpha), master's pack, kiera?- turned against her will (attacked), culprit discovered amongst the alpha's parents entourage, alpha's sister - jasmine?

Thank You

You write with a power and pride that tell me that in our world, you're no Omega. I'm enjoying your story greatly. It is the first ever on this website of which I read more than two chapters. I've read eight of your chapters so far, and I see that your fan base has inspired you to write many more still. Thank you.

You are looking for a story titled 'Following the Feeling' by cricketmuse. Also one of my favorites, however, I do not see it getting an ending anytime soon as the last submission was in the sring of 2011.

Hope this helps!

Also, this is about the 10th time I'm reading 'Bound to my Mate' -- I love it!

The story you are looking for is called "Forced" by Phoenixbreez. It was removed from Lit. Alexandra (Alex) Marshall was the main character. Her mate was Dominic Masters.

A lot of authors are finding their stories republished on other sites, with no credit given. It's sad others are trying to pass someone else's creativity as their own. I was anxiously waiting for that particular story to be completed. Sadly, it wil have no ending.

"Following The Feeling" is also a great story. It's main characters are Kiera and Grayson.

Write more stories! I just finished you other one and almost cried when I did, I can totally tell just by the first chapter I will love this one as well.. I really hope you add some more work!

How can I find the story Forced by Phoenixbree? It sounds interesting. Good story her too

Phoenixbreeze deleted the story "Forced". I just found out a few days ago. It was awesome and I will sadly miss finding out how the story would have ended.

Darn it. Well thanks for looking. I should set up my own account.

Does anyone know where she is posting now? I loved her stories and would like to still support her.

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check wattpad

I was looking for a story in this genre. Its about a guy who is some sort of fire being falling in love with a human girl.

But I can't find it. I don't know what it's called either.

Does anyone know what I'm talking about?

I believe the story you're looking for was by the author Mazuri. I can't remember the name of the story, but it had a fire being falling in love with a human. There were also a lot of other supernatural beings and it had a sequel as well. I do know Mazuri took all of his work down due to it being stolen. He has a profile on wattpad, but no stories published. Hope this helps :)

A few months back I read a story like this, and the opening chapter had a woman with a flat tire who was helped out by, suprise suprise, her mate. I can't remember the author or the name of the story. Anyone know of it?

You're looking for Hungry Like the Wolf by wanderingmindgames. She just posted another chapter too. :)

It's The Hungry Wolf

I look forward to reading the rest of the story. You've started with a really strong beginning and I only hope the rest can keep up the pace.

If you don't like it, don't read it. you don't have to comment about it being trash.

thanks . I hope you write a LOT more stories this good .

Don´t know how many times in the last years I have read this stoys.

I allways like to read them again

Great beginning to this story! Can't wait to get into more of the story!

I have issues on how women are treated, a real man doesn't do that to a woman, and yes I know it's just a story. But after teaching martial arts for 30 years, I've run into The results of that type of behavior.

The story will wear written, keep on writing. I'll try you again sometime.

I marked this story for reading a while ago and I'm just getting around to it. Glad I did, it's starting off really hot. I liked the fact that he got her all hot and bothered in the bathroom scene and then just let her go to allow her feelings to 'percolate' for a while.

Wonderful world created, and great believable characters.

Solid and honest story line.

Well written.

Whoever form readers sees this, please don't get discouraged by the longer story and read till the end. I just wish this was in hardcover, I love this story with my body and soul :)

And in case you want to top the joy of reading it, try listening to this during the reading.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XrisCsNzOlo&t=604s

This is my 5th time reading this story, it gets better every time...

Looking with anticipation to reading this tale from its great beginning.

Intriguing start, well written, looking forward to what comes next.

The uncharacteristic start nearly had me closing the page down, I am glad I didn't, the interest piqued my curiosity shortly before they washroom scene.

I try to comment whenever I favorite a story. Looking at the writing of most chapters, I think it is serviceable in the 4-star range. It is the story as whole that earns a favorite, thanks to Elizabeth's character arc and interesting aspects of werewolf culture.

Just finished this whole series and I truly think it could be expanded and published. Keep writing! You have a real talent and o what a lovely filthy mind. Thanks so much for the read. Made me cum so many times I feel like I should cash app you lmao

Okay this definitely has my attention, that bathroom scene was steamy... talk about being aroused. On to the next chapter, hope it doesn't disappoint.