by LaPatitMort
Strangely compelling. I dont think this story has ended yet and hope you will continue it.
I hate when someone throws away a perfectly good pussy.
Nice story - I agree that it hasn't ended
I was very touched by this story. In helping her, he helped himself. We know how he feels, but not how she feels. I think he needs to know, that she didn't seduce him because she felt she owed him.
Please wtire another chapter.
The beginning of your story, while hopefully extreme , is possibly any accurate reflection on cultural bigotry. The ending does leave the door open for more chapters. Looking forward to them
THIS COULD GO SO MANY WAYS, ALL OF THEM GOOD , I HOPE TO SEE MORE OF THESE TWO AND HOW THE WORLD WILL REACT TO THEM
OK, so it's only two stories now, but neither one comes to a recognizable conclusion. Maybe the pen-name LaPetitMort comes from how the stories die before their time.
Petit mort literally translates as "little death", but this is the term the French use to describe an orgasm. Of course, since I know more about orgasms than I do about French, I could be persuaded to think that la patit mort is a writer who kills his little stories.
I like your style of ending stories. This was really some interesting reading. I loved the wide open ending. Thanks for sharing.
Where's the ending....You can't leave it like that. Where's the girls dialog. Good story just needs more!!!!