All Comments on 'Beaten and Having no Value'

by LaPatitMort

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blue5766blue5766over 13 years ago
please continue

Strangely compelling. I dont think this story has ended yet and hope you will continue it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
What a waste

I hate when someone throws away a perfectly good pussy.

Nice story - I agree that it hasn't ended

Socially_IneptSocially_Ineptover 13 years ago
Very touching

I was very touched by this story. In helping her, he helped himself. We know how he feels, but not how she feels. I think he needs to know, that she didn't seduce him because she felt she owed him.

Please wtire another chapter.

mkrogersmkrogersover 13 years ago
Intolerance

The beginning of your story, while hopefully extreme , is possibly any accurate reflection on cultural bigotry. The ending does leave the door open for more chapters. Looking forward to them

C_frommnC_frommnover 13 years ago
Good Story

But the way you left it.

it sounds like a Second Chapter is Do.

catman71catman71over 13 years ago
SO MANY OPTIONS

THIS COULD GO SO MANY WAYS, ALL OF THEM GOOD , I HOPE TO SEE MORE OF THESE TWO AND HOW THE WORLD WILL REACT TO THEM

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Fast and enjoyable read -hot and sexy.

I really enjoy your work.

juanviejojuanviejoabout 13 years ago
I gave you 5 Stars, but...

I think you definitely need a Chapter 2.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Thats It ??!!

Great start. Where does it go from here??

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
aaaaaaaaaaaaaand?????

You're almost there, get on with it!!!!

GoesGruntGoesGruntover 9 years ago
Seeing A Pattern

OK, so it's only two stories now, but neither one comes to a recognizable conclusion. Maybe the pen-name LaPetitMort comes from how the stories die before their time.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
French lessons

Petit mort literally translates as "little death", but this is the term the French use to describe an orgasm. Of course, since I know more about orgasms than I do about French, I could be persuaded to think that la patit mort is a writer who kills his little stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Sorry , I didn't mean to hit only 1 star, should've been 5. DFW

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
This Screams For Part II

‘nough said

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Indeed

I agree with the previous comment. Please write more

chytownchytownover 3 years ago
Another Good One*****

I like your style of ending stories. This was really some interesting reading. I loved the wide open ending. Thanks for sharing.

Shadowolfe1313Shadowolfe1313over 1 year ago

Liked this story. Will be reading more of them.

Theiceman2277Theiceman22778 months ago

Where Is the Next Chapter ...needs a follow up !!....Cheers

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Really excellent!

DadieODadieO4 months ago

Where's the ending....You can't leave it like that. Where's the girls dialog. Good story just needs more!!!!

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