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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous07/09/10

Really original!

And a fun read. Thanks!

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by nomoretears0007/09/10

Interesting and different

Very unusual...I enjoy your stories.

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by Mistress_Canada07/12/10

Such a great story

You painted the scene beautifully with your words. You write with a real sense of both character and setting. Well done

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by LiteClow08/06/13

Awesome. Different. Cute. Perfect.

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by VCHeysham10/26/13

Clever!

And very sweet :-)

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by Anonymous11/27/13

Justawriter

My gawd this was lovely, excellent!!!!!

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by Anonymous12/02/13

REALLY REALLY LOVED THIS!

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