It's so refreshing to read an erotic story without all the banging and screaming. Very well written, descriptive and sensitive. Nice job.
I agree, it's quiet, smooth and good. very well done.
Very nice atmosphere in this piece. Good luck in the contest.
such a nice build with all the right words. You could feel the passion sweep over the characters so realistically. This story had a lot of feeling to it. Nice writing. Thank you
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It's so refreshing to read an erotic story without all the banging and screaming. Very well written, descriptive and sensitive. Nice job.
Nicely done!
I agree, it's quiet, smooth and good. very well done.
Elegant
Very nice atmosphere in this piece. Good luck in the contest.
subtly erotic
such a nice build with all the right words. You could feel the passion sweep over the characters so realistically. This story had a lot of feeling to it. Nice writing. Thank you
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