WOW, you sure can write, but I hope this isn't the end. There's a lot of promise to this one.
wow great story. like the pervious person said what happens next. will they be together or not hmmmmmmmm. wait with baited breath to the next part.
I'm just like the other reviewer's, I too hope that this isn't the end of the "Black knight" series, If so so here's some suggested title's for future "Black" title's: "The Moor/Black Gladiator," "The Black Soldier," "The Black Book: A black solider's personal journal written during war time in 'Nam," "King Tepus: sequel to Black Knight." These are just ideals. BTW I think I sent my email address to you, I'm known as the dollfacekilla.
Too bad the ending was so lame. Should have ended with Tepus and Maggie fucking furiously once the battle was over, with him then taking Maggie back to his country to be his queen. The story should have ended then with Tepus fucking her blonde pussy again, the first of many fuckings that would result in her producing babies for her king.
feel that the end was rushed and that they needed to build up to a grand climax with her leaving with him or him ruling her kingdom as her husband and father of her children.
You should continue this story
I would love to see them together in the end.
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