All Comments on 'A Sight To Behold'

I found it particularly odd that in a voyeur story there was no real physical description of Melissa. I know some writers leave those things vague on purpose so readers can insert themselves into the story, but in a voyeur story I think that it's particularly important do do that. I never really felt drawn into the voyeurism part of the story. Besides that, it was well-written.

"Guess what, darling? I fucked Melissa last night. Oh, and before you throw that saucepan at my head, I guess I should mention that I've kinda promised you'll let Taylor fuck you this weekend and lick out Melissa's pussy. Honey, just put that kitchen knife down..."

Great stuff, I adore cunt lapping

Sorry, but you can't write for beans. This is terrible. You don't sound like a native speaker. Maybe an ESL course would help. As for the plot—? Really believable, uh huh, uh, huh.