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Growing Pains Ch. 02

byCatalinaGrissom©
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by Anonymous

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by unfairplay07/08/10

You could really have a good story but you need an editor.

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by Anonymous07/08/10

I Agree

Your story has great promise. U should utilize the editors here ther are very kind.

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by pmpkty07/08/10

i like it

it seems a little rushed to me, but I can't wait to see what it turns into

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by Anonymous07/08/10

Good Story

I am looking forward to reading more. Thanks

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by Anonymous08/07/10

I also Agree

An editor will go a long way. They're really cool too.

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by Jujubee5010/18/10

Not Bad For A First Time Author

This story does have potential. A proofreader can help too.

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by THELOVELY1GLO05/14/12

Good

but we need more to keep us going...

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by KittyOh4807/14/12

WTF?

Lots more please! Very interesting!

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by IronDragon06/01/13

Please continue!

This tale is outstanding! Fast paced, and hot as hell. Please continue and get perv dad taken care of in a very violent manner!

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by Anonymous06/08/13

GET AN EDITOR!!!!!!

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