The Bet

considering the subject very cute

Kelly is a very cool character. Easy to love. Your descriptions were very playful and fun - the paragraph when they got home and stripped - I was dying. Hopping kangaroos sheesh. Fun, I look forward to more. Nice job.

thanks

Thanks for helping a brother out with some positive feedback.

This was a very fun story to write, so I'm glad the playful tone came through as designed.

Loved It!!

Great story and time of discovery!!

Awesome story

The story was very easy to follow. Great writing by the way. Made me almost have an accident. Had to use the bathroom. Bravo!!

Thanks Jenna!

Thanks for the feedback Jenna. Feel free to contact me here if you have any ideas for other stories. I just posted a new one you may like called "Stuck in the elevator with Steph"

I loved it!

That was a damn hot story... I loved his "accidental" spurts the most. I love it when a guy starts to lose it.

Great story - Loved it

Congratulations on such a marvellous story peebudy.
Very well worded and great plot. Glad you wrote this and I am looking forward to reading all your other submissions.

Thanks. -x-

WET WET WET

Brought back some fond memories.

Good story. Made me think fondly of my college days!