All Comments on 'To the Citadel and Beyond Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
terrific

Great stuff -- more please

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
a very awsome erotic sci fi story

I think your story really has some great sci fi and erotic elements! Teona is a great character! Boy, did she have a great time sucking those cocks :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Worth the wait

Thanks for a very entertaining new series. I hope this adventure will be long.

Well done!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

A very high quality story! I love this series. The only improvement I can think of is to add some more humiliation. And more dialogue during the blowjobs. But overall 5/5. Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

really enjoy your stories, would like to "see" a little more gagging & face fucking while she does those blowjobs

sirreadsalot10sirreadsalot10over 13 years ago
I have to admit...

...that I am a little dissapointed that Katryn and Garth were not in the story more. But having said that, It is a good beginning and I look forward to seeing where you take it from here.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
A mindless prattle by an illiterate halfwit.

Real bad. "1" !

Stakhanov01Stakhanov01over 11 years ago
erotic comedy

I love good erotic comedy and this is just up my street. I hope it continues in the same vein. It is especially good when the stereotypes of genres such as fantasy

get overturned and spilled all over the floor.

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