All Comments on 'Subway Surprise'

very cool development of a real daydream. thanks.

I'm a female who is very into water sports (mostly receiving but I've just started experimenting with giving too), and this made me really hot after reading it on my phone during my lunch break (interesting coincidence). Thanks :-)

Believable and well-written. Thank you

Loved reading this, on my phone a well, would love to read more about this couple.

I love watersports and I love peebudy stories.

I I had to rub myself off reading this as it totally turned me on, I hope Peebudy writes more submissions. My only complaint is that I am going to get a sore pussy if I read any more today.

The best thing about this story is not only the believable story line but also how extremely well written it is and how it made me cum.

Luv ya peebady xxx

loved every bit of the story... never have got the chance to try my 'piss sex' curiousness, but certainly is 'hard' by the idea of it... do keep up the good work...

P.S. - and thanks for commenting about my story...

I loved the story. Why can't I meet someone like her?!?

Ugggh I loved it!

You wrote this a while ago now - If you are still checking in here a sequel would be good.

A lot of typos and misused words, and a tense change in the middle, but still a hot and wet story.