One of the better stories I have read here. I can't wait to see what you come up with next!! I hope that this ends up being a very long story, an possibly with a few areas that allow for the story to branch off in different directions thus allowing for a few run off series. Keep up the great work.
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Anonymous07/11/10
Great read!
Love the quirky, smart heroine! Her inner monologue makes my day. Tall and Dark isn't bad either ;-)
definitely more creepy than sexy. Story alphas are usually charismatic as well as domineering. So far this guy is no fun at all. Where is the charm? Where is the likability? While I understand the she is drawn to him, I'm not in the slightest and don't really understand where she's coming from. I like the premise though and hopefully, Joel will turn into the kind of alpha male I enjoy.
agree with one of the other posters that I read yesterday. It's a well developed story and your heroine is really something else but your hero is giving me a bit of the creeps. He seems more stalker boy than alpha male. Give the boy a bit of sweetness and a chance to do his own legwork and you'll have a real winner here. Keep up the good work.
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Anonymous07/13/10
Intriguing!!!
Excellent Story.
I hope you will post more. Fantastic plot.
by
Anonymous07/13/10
loving it!
I'm really enjoying reading this story, loving how aloof main male is. Can't wait for next chapter...
Cheers
This chapter has made Joel more likable in my opinion. At the end of this chapter he conceded to her personal space, even though he is out of his element in how he is accustomed to dealing with others. I think that is why I ike the were love stories so much. It is always the first time they have dealt with love relationships, so they are bound to make some mistakes. Some are worse than others, but I don't dislike our alpha. It shows that he is dealing with his own struggle with someone that he can't simply bend to his will. He has to get her to choose him just as much as he has chosen her. I think you have done a good job at portraying the awkwardness that would come with moving so swiftly into a new relationship where both people have problems adjusting. Looking forward to the next chapter!
I am really enjoying this story and hope you post the rest soon!
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Anonymous07/17/10
Like it
Just don't love it.
But I'm going to keep reading to see how it plays out.
by
Anonymous03/27/11
Dry opinion
Perfect again.
by
Anonymous07/24/11
ITS ABOUT TIME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
I have been searching EVERYWHERE for a good story!!! But nothing was good enough for my taste until i found this. THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!
wow i think you broke you're capslock button either that or you really should get a new keyboard since your ! button seems broken too lol
love the story so far cant wait to see how it goes, gotta love a werewolf story they all see to have good affection and great endings... gotta love good endings :)
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Anonymous03/23/12
laaaammmeee
i need details not twist after twist and she gave up will not really she didnt even put up a fight she is kinda like a little bitch
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Anonymous04/30/12
Girl, no! She needs to run, and get some perspective. I like that she isn't afraid to speak her mind, but she needs to put his overbearing ass in line! Poor girl, doesn't know what sheis in for. I really like her, and feel oddly worried about her. Good story!
Sarai
Hasnt anyone ever told you that you never run from a were, especialy a wolf
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Anonymous07/26/12
wow girl
girl when he starts stalking you you have got to run away girl run away cuz if you dont hes gunna hunt u down and rape you so run away girl RUN AWAY cuz he gonna find you
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Anonymous09/03/12
stupid
You never run from a were especially a werewolf its kinda pointless and stupid.
I love this story so far! Ignore the stupid people bickering in your comments. She didn't run, and is infatuated with his smell, etc., because she belongs with him. It feels right to her. Why would she run? Stupid people.
Second, lets all assume that the characters in this story are not avid Lit readers and really have no speculative opinions regarding how best to handle werewolves.
The nurses were concerned for her and making statements based on what little they knew. They all admitted having very little actual knowledge of wolves outside of folklore.
Stop being so overly critical and read the story.
by
Anonymous12/05/12
Great writing!
I love your writing! I read a lot of stories on Literotica but when I came across your first chapter I haven't been able to stop. You are an excellent writer.
by
Anonymous06/08/13
She's still slutty and . . .
"according to the gossip, legal was only (an) issue if they made it one" . . .
he's unethical.
Do they develop worthwhile characters at any point?
by
Anonymous07/04/13
Characters
Just because characters might not seem moral or ethical does not mean that they aren't worthy characters to explore. And I hardly think that two chapters is enough to judge the merit of any character. Like alot of DocWolf's fan's I have read this story multiple times. Like any good novel the characters are developed overtime--and trust me you will get to see all these virtuous "and worthwhile" characteristics that you seem so eager for.
As ever, thank you again for the great story Doc!
You are making the mistake of judging the characters on "gossip." Gossip is usually never good or in any way accurate. Like the other commenter I would suggest you keep reading and you will understand more of what you have read. Think of the reasons people have to gossip and say mean things. I have read this story and her other one posted here several times and have found them to be well thought out and engrossing stories. Don't let a misinterpretation of what the sentence actually says blind you to a good read. I hope you enjoy.
English
do continue
nice concept
really liked it
expecting more gud stuff
Very interesting . .
I love their straight forward way of doing things. They are so blunt. Its new to me and very entertaining! Can't wait for the next one.
Thank you
Great to see a new chapter.Please keep going as I love this story.
Very well done...
One of the better stories I have read here. I can't wait to see what you come up with next!! I hope that this ends up being a very long story, an possibly with a few areas that allow for the story to branch off in different directions thus allowing for a few run off series. Keep up the great work.
Great read!
Love the quirky, smart heroine! Her inner monologue makes my day. Tall and Dark isn't bad either ;-)
Loving this!!!!!
Love the start so fa. Very interesting turn of events in the second chapter. Can't wait for the next one.
Ummmm... This is
definitely more creepy than sexy. Story alphas are usually charismatic as well as domineering. So far this guy is no fun at all. Where is the charm? Where is the likability? While I understand the she is drawn to him, I'm not in the slightest and don't really understand where she's coming from. I like the premise though and hopefully, Joel will turn into the kind of alpha male I enjoy.
keep up the good work
I like how the story is written so far. =) It's different.
atado a mi mate
una historia alucinante, hermosa,romantica, espero muy pronto nevos capitulos, anamaseri (ana maria)
Loved it!
Cant wait to read next installment. Something about that alpha male gets me humming. Keep up the good work.
Fabulous!!!
Absolutely fabulous!!!
it'd be nice to see her resist a little... a chase is always nice to read
but i like the story so far
5 stars!
Looking forward to the next chapter.
I've been enjoying your story but I do have to
agree with one of the other posters that I read yesterday. It's a well developed story and your heroine is really something else but your hero is giving me a bit of the creeps. He seems more stalker boy than alpha male. Give the boy a bit of sweetness and a chance to do his own legwork and you'll have a real winner here. Keep up the good work.
Intriguing!!!
Excellent Story.
I hope you will post more. Fantastic plot.
loving it!
I'm really enjoying reading this story, loving how aloof main male is. Can't wait for next chapter...
Cheers
you have me interested
This chapter has made Joel more likable in my opinion. At the end of this chapter he conceded to her personal space, even though he is out of his element in how he is accustomed to dealing with others. I think that is why I ike the were love stories so much. It is always the first time they have dealt with love relationships, so they are bound to make some mistakes. Some are worse than others, but I don't dislike our alpha. It shows that he is dealing with his own struggle with someone that he can't simply bend to his will. He has to get her to choose him just as much as he has chosen her. I think you have done a good job at portraying the awkwardness that would come with moving so swiftly into a new relationship where both people have problems adjusting. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Thank you!
I am really enjoying this story and hope you post the rest soon!
Like it
Just don't love it.
But I'm going to keep reading to see how it plays out.
Dry opinion
Perfect again.
ITS ABOUT TIME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
I have been searching EVERYWHERE for a good story!!! But nothing was good enough for my taste until i found this. THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!
wow i think you broke you're capslock button either that or you really should get a new keyboard since your ! button seems broken too lol
love the story so far cant wait to see how it goes, gotta love a werewolf story they all see to have good affection and great endings... gotta love good endings :)
laaaammmeee
i need details not twist after twist and she gave up will not really she didnt even put up a fight she is kinda like a little bitch
Girl, no! She needs to run, and get some perspective. I like that she isn't afraid to speak her mind, but she needs to put his overbearing ass in line! Poor girl, doesn't know what sheis in for. I really like her, and feel oddly worried about her. Good story!
Sarai
Were
Hasnt anyone ever told you that you never run from a were, especialy a wolf
wow girl
girl when he starts stalking you you have got to run away girl run away cuz if you dont hes gunna hunt u down and rape you so run away girl RUN AWAY cuz he gonna find you
stupid
You never run from a were especially a werewolf its kinda pointless and stupid.
XIII
Whatever
I love this story so far! Ignore the stupid people bickering in your comments. She didn't run, and is infatuated with his smell, etc., because she belongs with him. It feels right to her. Why would she run? Stupid people.
Ridiculous Nit Pickers.
FIrst off DW, I love your stories, Thank you!
Second, lets all assume that the characters in this story are not avid Lit readers and really have no speculative opinions regarding how best to handle werewolves.
The nurses were concerned for her and making statements based on what little they knew. They all admitted having very little actual knowledge of wolves outside of folklore.
Stop being so overly critical and read the story.
Great writing!
I love your writing! I read a lot of stories on Literotica but when I came across your first chapter I haven't been able to stop. You are an excellent writer.
She's still slutty and . . .
"according to the gossip, legal was only (an) issue if they made it one" . . .
he's unethical.
Do they develop worthwhile characters at any point?
Characters
Just because characters might not seem moral or ethical does not mean that they aren't worthy characters to explore. And I hardly think that two chapters is enough to judge the merit of any character. Like alot of DocWolf's fan's I have read this story multiple times. Like any good novel the characters are developed overtime--and trust me you will get to see all these virtuous "and worthwhile" characteristics that you seem so eager for.
As ever, thank you again for the great story Doc!
Further answer to earlier Anonymous.
You are making the mistake of judging the characters on "gossip." Gossip is usually never good or in any way accurate. Like the other commenter I would suggest you keep reading and you will understand more of what you have read. Think of the reasons people have to gossip and say mean things. I have read this story and her other one posted here several times and have found them to be well thought out and engrossing stories. Don't let a misinterpretation of what the sentence actually says blind you to a good read. I hope you enjoy.
Good Story so Far.
My interest is peaking! :)
Boring.
I don't know why I continue reading this.
To Boring.
Don't continue reading you will "not" be missed.
Second time reading and still love it
Well then....
What kind of retard gets into a car with people who broke into her house and watched them sleep? I imagine that takes a special kind of idiocy.
love it wish the chapters were longer
I am loving it .This story could not be long enough .
Stephen J
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