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Great part 2!
I like the way this story is going :)
good story
I liked it, although I don't care much for people pretending to be related. I know, all the stories are pretend, but I like to pretend they're real, funny huh? Btw, does sex with a fifth cousin count as real incest? I have an idea for a story, involving meeting a fifth cousin from kentucky that I think would be a good read.
Not an incest/taboo story...
Wrong category, mate. Blew it for me.
flop
the end of chapter one was bad this was worse. if you wanted to go incest then you should have had her make out with her sister or for them to somehow find out they were related. this was not incest or taboo would have been better in the erotic couplings area i hate fake incest stories
Idiots
It's amazing how many people only feel able to snipe when they're hiding behind the mask of anonymity. I'm really enjoying this series, though I believe the first two chapters would work better as one instalment. The mention of Ali's sister does hint that you might bring her into the story, but right now, I like how you're handling the characters. Please continue, only you've now used the "erection / mousetrap" metaphor twice in your stories, so it's time to retire that one.
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