even though it was fairly short. Write many more with similar basic story lines. Some of us are tired of the fact that so many who wrote stories like this got ran off by the boo-birds. Anyway, thanks for the story.
I always enjoy reading your stories. Thank you for keeping us so happily entertained.
but nothing really special in word-smithing or plotting.
I have read almost exactly the same plot elsewhere on this site.
this is the way for it to be done. Sounds like they were all happy with the payment plan. Was this a variation of "Lay" away?
A good story, fast moving and it read well, thanks
Not special enough for 5 stars. Perhaps 4 stars is a fair rating.
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best story you've ever written...
even though it was fairly short. Write many more with similar basic story lines. Some of us are tired of the fact that so many who wrote stories like this got ran off by the boo-birds. Anyway, thanks for the story.
Great One Bob!
I always enjoy reading your stories. Thank you for keeping us so happily entertained.
Enjoyable
but nothing really special in word-smithing or plotting.
Not as original as some of yours
I have read almost exactly the same plot elsewhere on this site.
If you are going to be set up ...
this is the way for it to be done. Sounds like they were all happy with the payment plan. Was this a variation of "Lay" away?
A guy could wind up fucking himself into the poor house with a woman like that.
A good story, fast moving and it read well, thanks
A nice story
Not special enough for 5 stars. Perhaps 4 stars is a fair rating.
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