The Gold Digger Ch. 10

Getting stupid

Sorry but i think your just getting stupid now. The story is stretching and stretching. I hope she miscarries and cuts his dick off.

Are you going to continue this? Please add a Chapter 11!

More

Damn! Another unfinished story. Please finish this one as well.

You have a pattern of Un finished work.

I'm not reading anymore of your work. You don't seem to know how to finish and there is nothing more annoying than taking the time to read all the chapters just to find out the author didn't bother to finish it. Especially since you have new work.

Give us a break.

I agree with the other comments. A good story but no ending. Why???

Hypocrit

In chapter 7 he sodomizes Carol because he feels it is his "right" as a man to do this. He buggers her in spite of her begging, tears and pleas not to. He is totally unfeeling, as he has been throughout, to her own feelings and only his feelings must be rewarded. In real life if he did such a thing and any Doctor found out how much he had physically damaged her he would be on his way to Jail. Also a "Real" man does not force women to perform acts which they find disgusting and damaging.
The whole story stopped there. The rest, and most of her torture before that is an indictment on men like this.

yes...

You're right about the Gold Digger. I've already set out to rewrite the whole story.