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A Neighborly Bet

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by Anonymous

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by andrus07/12/10

very hot

love this story, very sexy and hot!

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by Pistolpackinpete07/12/10

And so?.....

....total lack of tension or drama makes for a great nap inducement.

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by Anonymous07/13/10

Need 2 continue your story!

I think you need to continue the story. She said she had a divorced sister or Joe hadn't fucked her since his birthday. Maybe a divorce there????

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by Anonymous07/13/10

Add more days and maybe bring the sister in.

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by Anonymous07/13/10

Damn Fool...

...the husband. This is a woman who has taken care of herself, has normal feelings and desires and idiot doesn't treat her like anything special and then...induces his neighbor to take a shot at her.
Do a second chapter, these two will make love, fuck, get kinky and screw eachothers brains out. Maybe sis can get invited after the week of wifey enjoying the hell out of her stud.
Actually, I can see her having an affair with him after numbnuts gets back and our guy just never has to date again...life is outrageous, his lover is puuurrrrrfet!!!

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by oldwayne07/13/10

I kept nodding my head while I was reading...

then it occurred to me that this story was putting me to sleep. I gave it 3 Stars, just for shits and grins. You need to stay out of this category.

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by digdaddyrich07/13/10

It seems as if the husband has lost his desire for female flesh

A woman shouldn't go to waste just because her husband doesn't want to have sex anymore.

Good pussy should never be something that you let go to waste.

Good story, thanks

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by ryu7707/13/10

Half baked attempt

This is what is wrong with loving wives betting stories, they always end up screwing so there is no tension there. Also, why the hell the husband did that bet? At least give us information about it but then this is another wank story. No tension = no interest. And if you continue, it will be the typical"I will have sex with her sister and then I will have my own harem".

So not interested in more.

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by cuninglinguist6107/14/10

From the author...

For the record, and in response a few of the previous comments, I did NOT enter this story in the "Loving Wives" category. It was moved there by the editors, without my knowledge.

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by Scorpio4407/18/10

There is only one excuse

for going fishing with "the guys" when there's a beautiful woman who wants sex at home. I can't remember what it is. The husband in this story is an idiot! Followed by a wife who finds out how great it is next door. Why does she limit her time with the lusty neighbor. In a week she could move in!
Thank you. Other than my minor concerns, I liked it.

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by Anonymous01/01/11

Good story.

Not all stories need to have a deep plot with tension. Some, like this well written story can be just entertainment. Haven't read you before author, but will soon remedy that. Thanks. ML

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by DWornock09/12/11

1*

Sounds gay

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by Anonymous11/08/11

DWmoroncock is so stupid

when the judge said "Order in the court," she said "Fries and a coke please."

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by imhapless06/06/13

Very entertaining

Need I say more?

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by Anonymous11/11/13

Booring read.

Need I say more ?

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by Anonymous01/26/16

Husband isn't fishing, he is having a gay old time with his buddy

He returns after setting up a wife he no longer wants with a neighbour who wants her and will help raise his kids when he takes off. The sister could be added into help with the kids and bed time routines.
Will there be another chapter or do we all just make up our own endings?
DC

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