All Comments on 'Sex School Fun'

by bunny_ears

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CeliaisAlienaCeliaisAlienaalmost 14 years ago
A fun day in class!

The talent for dropping the reader smack-down into an uninhibited graphic sex scene is an underappreciated one, and I like the way you establish the Sex School concept and get everything going at once, all the while carefully brushing in the little bits of competition and crush simmering between all the participants. Clare's implied underdog, shy girl status makes her charming.

Also, of course, the acts themselves are very uninhibited and hot! This is a very fun story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Great start

You could definitely make this into a fantastic series. I hope there's more to cum!

kasperozkasperozalmost 14 years ago
Great work

Hope you develop this in to a series as their is plenty of scope with your sex school. Good to see an Aussie with talent.

bunny_earsbunny_earsalmost 14 years agoAuthor
yes, theres a sequel!

yes there is going to be a sequel and i have already started writing it, hope you enjoy it when it comes out!

DamianShepDamianShepover 12 years ago

I love the concept! Keep writting!

SojournalistSojournalistalmost 12 years ago
A turnaround!!

A traditionally male fantasy scenario, but written by a young woman? I LOVE this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Awesome

Definitely one of the best stories Ive read on here! Amazing fantasy and incredibly well-written... bravo!

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