The talent for dropping the reader smack-down into an uninhibited graphic sex scene is an underappreciated one, and I like the way you establish the Sex School concept and get everything going at once, all the while carefully brushing in the little bits of competition and crush simmering between all the participants. Clare's implied underdog, shy girl status makes her charming.
Also, of course, the acts themselves are very uninhibited and hot! This is a very fun story.
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Anonymous07/14/10
Great start
You could definitely make this into a fantastic series. I hope there's more to cum!
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A fun day in class!
The talent for dropping the reader smack-down into an uninhibited graphic sex scene is an underappreciated one, and I like the way you establish the Sex School concept and get everything going at once, all the while carefully brushing in the little bits of competition and crush simmering between all the participants. Clare's implied underdog, shy girl status makes her charming.
Also, of course, the acts themselves are very uninhibited and hot! This is a very fun story.
Great start
You could definitely make this into a fantastic series. I hope there's more to cum!
Great work
Hope you develop this in to a series as their is plenty of scope with your sex school. Good to see an Aussie with talent.
yes, theres a sequel!
yes there is going to be a sequel and i have already started writing it, hope you enjoy it when it comes out!
I love the concept! Keep writting!
A turnaround!!
A traditionally male fantasy scenario, but written by a young woman? I LOVE this.
Awesome
Definitely one of the best stories Ive read on here! Amazing fantasy and incredibly well-written... bravo!
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