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More please. :)
uhmmm....
I like the story...but this guy is giving me the creeps! i feel like at any min he's gonna smack her around or something. I dont want you to stop writing but take in considerations that to some of the readers that this guy is a little creepy!
creepy
this guy just seems a little to weird , and she seems to be a little drugged is my best word, what is going on
why is this in romance? non consent/reluctance would be more like it, this guy is just creepy
Yeah, it's definitely not romance...I'd probably put it under 'Mind Control.' It isn't one of those weird sci-fi things, but this definitely has some kind of psychological MC going on - almost like Stockholm Syndrome, where the captor is able to get the victim to identify with his or her way of thinking.
Trash
Can somebody just delete this story? It is wrongly categorized and the fucking author does not even know the meaning of lying on your back and lying on your stomach...she freaking interchanged their meanings.
And yes, please STOP WRITING SHIT.
Oh god I'm getting a bit worried
He seems to know exactly what he wants her to do a little too precisely and knows she will
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