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by CliAnd07/14/10

Like it, will there be more ??

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by ElleMunro7807/14/10

Forgot to put that this should be chapter 1!!!

Hi there

Yes, it's the first of a series - I forgot to put Chapter 1 in the title (what an idiot!!). I'll post chapter 2 soon and hopefully it will all make more sense!

Thanks

Elle x

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by StarMAP07/14/10

Yay!! =)

I'm so glad Mike gets his own story. He is such a great guy, he deserves someone good. Can't wait to see how this turns out!

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by Anonymous07/15/10

Good start to Michael's story

I don't remember these woman from Chalk and Cheese so descriptions of them would be great. I like Al she seems to be extremely witty. The water hose was mean but effective. Looking forward to reading more. Thanks

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by catman7107/15/10

great start

al is a hoot , as are her friends already, and it seems she is just what mike needs , and i hope we get more of greg and tori , as they have to be a part of the story, hope to see more soon

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by Anonymous07/15/10

Yay!

I'm anxiously waiting for more! To reader below... I think the only character in chalk & cheese, is Tamara? she's in the story where Greg's pacing, nervous about his first date with Tori, and she sits in his chair and is very very pregnant?

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by Anonymous07/15/10

ok so....

I'm gonna need for the slut herself and her sidepiece to seriously get what's coming to them. She probably only wants custody bc her a lukeypoo want to keep living off of Mike. Make her suffer!

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by Lunanoire07/17/10

Glad you are back

Like your tone and characters, as always.

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by ccmioon08/01/10

love it

continue its seems like its going to be awesome

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by cpm0908/06/10

great start!

I was hoping for a story for Michael! Excellent..update soon if you can!!

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by Anonymous08/10/10

More!!!

Can't wait for the next installment!

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by honeybree09/29/10

The follow up I was waiting on...

I almost missed this story but notice your name so I check it out to see it was a follow up to Chalk and Cheese! Loving the start of Topsy Turvy so far, and poor Mike hope he get his just do soon but Alanna and her friends sound like a roit, can't wait for more!

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by peethree11/06/10

Finished up chalk and cheese when I realized you had finished it and started a new story. Looking forward to reading.

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by Anonymous12/11/10

New story

I was wondering, if it hasn't Been suggested already, but how about a back ground story on tamara and Brad. It would be nice to find out what trials they went to etc.

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by Anonymous01/31/11

and for the love of God, wipe your nipples!"

I had to wipe my computer down after reading that sentence i laughed so hard i spat tea on my computer, thanks. I have to agree with Alanna there is nothing worse than being on antibiotics not being able to drink and having to watch your drunken friends. Love what youv'e written so far.

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by Anonymous03/07/13

UNFINISHED STORY ALERT!!!!!!

BEWARE!!!! This story is not finished.

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