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The Choosing Ch. 09

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by Anonymous

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It is a well done story...

... Despite it being an Eiry tail I find that I'm enjoying it, and that does not happen often.
I would Have Roth suprize everyone by having had let her go to the Serren People (Or whatever you have called them, Odd Names are not easy for me to remember) in the first place, and that he's more mad that they betraid their Vessal.

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by KittyKat14707/14/10

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I love it!

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by GrumpyGamby07/15/10

I'll buy!

This is great. On pins and needles to see how this is going to end. Roth, Nadar, death, freedom... ooohh just can't wait.

Excellent story!

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by silver_firefly07/16/10

Great!

I'm eagerly waiting for the last two chapters, although I dread their arrival, too, knowing that they will signal the end of this series. Great work! I hope you write more of this genre in the future. :)

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by lusher03/27/11

so happy to have discovered you!

I will gladly support such a gifted writer!

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by Littlecat7604/21/13

My favourite chapter

Definitely my favourite chapter so far, more depth well done can't wait to read the end but not wanting the story to end

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