Voyeur's Fantasy

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is every white male want to share his wife.

twit

it took a twit to write this, go to the gay section you twit.

A pathetic attempt at a sad white mans fantasy. More like a nightmare to most people.

Divorce

I read the other comments and can't believe they didn't read your last paragraph...divorce.
It is not uncommon for a guy to think or want to see his wife fucked and it is usually a fantasy...nothing more!!!
Unfortunately...how she hooked up with the neighbor and how she is now a total slut, submissive to him would hurt, you seem to handle it well. This fetish is hers, not yours and she is a sneaking cheat!
You indicated you got your fetish off and were going to video the next day for your soon to be divorce...Good For You!!!
Write chapter 2, I would enjoy reading about all you do, how you confront her, them and what else you do!
I thought you wrote well, please do the 2nd chapter or - at least - an Epilogue?

Thr Lov ing Wife Nazis

Don't let the fools in this section get you down. They really are unable to see the worth of any story that dosn't end theway they want. That's why they choose the "Anonymous" option.
Your story was well written all though I would have personally liked to see more follow up on the divorce section. Most of the readers in this section like wimp endings or revenge ending.

If you read a few of the comments I received on my loving wife stories, you'll see what I mean.

Mendon

Voyeur's Dream, Husbands Nightmare

I hope there will be a second chapter to this story. Since the stories name is Voyeur's Dream", it sounds like he is a willing cuckold, but at the end of the story he is thinking about divorce. Which will it be?

Not very well written.

The story line was weak, the characters featureless and totally lacking any capacity for making a reader care about them. even JPB, whose stories are sometimes the source of my acid reflux when he is in his cuckold mood writes way better than this. His characters at least generate some kind of response from the reader and the plot lines are capable of generating some suspension of disbelief.

try again but take a little more time with it.

Regards Chagrined

P.S. Note that I do sign my name. :-)

Disappointed

I like the content, but the writing is too poor to be erotic.

good work

I hope at least one of the three men is a big black dude.

Interesting Duality

I think this author is spot on. One part of him gets excited by imagining and actually seeing his wife with someone else's big cock. The other part of him is horrified and seeks divorce. That's the duality. Still, the husband is doing the right thing. He realizes that the wife has traded the safe and kinky fantasy world for a real world affair. Affairs many times end in a tragic divorce.

The reality of the wife/voyeur fantasy...

... is that most men just want to see what their wives look like, from the perspective of a third person, sitting and watching her.

Save your marriages, guys! Grab a couple cheap video cameras (they're under $50.00 for cameras that will work for this purpose, at Radio $hack.) Set them up where you and she enjoy your best romps, take the phones off the hook, and have at it.

When you're done, you can either watch the raw footage, or use that MuVee Maker software that comes with Win XP, and edit the footage from two or more cameras (placed at different vantage points, to capture all angles of the action) into your own "adult movie", and even add credits.

You'll get your "voyeur" view of your wife shagging a guy. She may even get a thrill out of the deal. You'll just have to promise her that you won't let it loose on the Internet.

I think the cheating is what changes relationships

For her to fuck another man behind his back shows that she has no respect for her husband.

She has lied and cheated once that he knows about. How many other times has she cheated, that he doesn't know about?

I like his idea of taping them having sex, maybe sell the video to an internet website, and use the evidence to divorce her.

I might come to death...she said

good frickin line. And it weren't a bad tale either...Mancelt.

A good Read

Can not wait for the second part of this story.

It's not cheating if your dick gets hard.

When the husband gets hard watching his wife fuck the big dicked stud then she is not cheating. It's not her fault she needs more than he has to be satisfied. Bob admitted he wanted to watch Patty fuck a stud, he has no one to blame but himself. Now Bob should just be quiet and sit in the corner and play with himself while Patty is filled in the way she deserves.

The reality of anything sexual is that somethings turn some people on while they turn others off or do nothing for them. Save yourself guys. Take part in your kink and enjoy it and leave others the hell alone.

Nice story. It was a dick twitcher for me and I am looking forward to more from you.

Bad dialog

I've never heard someone use the phrase "I relish..." during hot sex.

Hot!

I enjoyed it very much and I would love a part 2 but would hate for them to get divorced. Bob needs to see his wifes pussy and ass get stretched out by those beautiful white big cocks!

seriously Bob, it is so sad.

You can only write a story like this if you want to suck dick... so go out, start sucking dick, and get off this site. You are a sad and pathetic loser who is only lying to himself.

not a bad fantasy

It is a fantasy of mine as well, to share my wife. I think it's about control. She does everything so well, I want to show another man how good she is, and be sure that my wife stays with me, so the other man will envy me.
I also love it when my wife is turned on, and I would like her to experience two men sucking her nipples at the same time, and I'd like her to be able to play with two cocks, but I don't want to lose her. A big cock does not win the woman anymore than big tits win the man. I had a relationship with a married woman whose husband was hung like a horse. She was so into me that my 5 1/2" tool drove her nuts. We were at each other for 10 years. If a big cock was so important, she wouldn't have wasted her time on me.
As far as the writing is concerned, I think it should have been edited a bit better, but I've read newspapers that are worse.

Missing

There is a lot more missing than provided in this odd tale! Did she see him naked in his backyard? Does he hit on every woman in the area? Did she advertise in the local hippy newsletter?

If this is Hubby's Voyeur Fantasy, why is he filing for divorce? Hubby got hard, but did he whack off and cum? Nothing much more about his reaction!

Overall, very unsatisfying for the reader. Maybe better for Neighbor, certainly a lot better for Sweetie

Puzzling?

How does something like this get a 4* rating? Un-fucking-believable.

Because....

A lot of men, me included enjoy our slut wives fucking other men, and women for that matter.