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Sun and Earth Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous07/15/10

want more

I like this story line so far and the writing is top notch thank u Mechmanas

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by StarMAP07/15/10

Oh wow!

This is just fantastic!!

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by cannd07/16/10

I really like this story. Can't wait for more. I like how you are developing the characters and their relationship to each other. The plot is slowly coming out. I hope in the next chapter you will make it more clear as to what is going on...where the story will go and that you tell us more about the two characters and who/what they are.

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by uchena07/19/10

WHOOO

I love it, This is really going to be an enjoyable story. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Happy Writing

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