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Good Story
Does he get time and a half for the second shift? They have a kid?
Good Lord, the poor little bugger!
Really fine work.
Enjoying your stories.
Even though as a general rule, I prefer a higher percentage of dialog vs. narrative in stories, you keep me reading. Good writing, and a pleasure to read a well thought-out crime story, with a dash or two of dry, ironic humor!
I voted too quickly sorry
I only gave it a 4 - he pissed me off - I spent enough time wearing my P.I.G. with honor to let him get away with that crap and let him hurt your score - lol getting old -
P = pride
I = Integrity
G = Guts
Integrity does not allow you get frustrated and cheat, it means leave and then enjoy the bunny.
Okay so far
I agree with the commenter ahead of me. Not enough dialogue yet for him to cheat on his wife. Being a Cop and enforcing the vice laws requires enough integrity to avoid being as bad as those you arrest... Most cops would not do that.
I know. I had over 45 years off and on being one...
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