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In response to your comment at the top.....
I really, really hope that your editing process is a quick one! I'm hooked on this story. If all chapters were already posted, I'd read it all at once. I'm a sucker for the intensity of Daren, & the fierce protectiveness I am assuming all of her newly found Seal friends will soon exhibit.
Excellent story
Very, good story so far I can't wait to see what happens. I look forward to the next installment
Great Start
Look forward to the follow ups. With that group.....I would certainly wouldn't want to be the ex. Special Forces have a way of taking care of their friends. This could be a fun read
hmmm
good start, and a SEAL team , jeff is deep deep DEEP shit
Thanks for chapter two!
And for already having the whole story written. I really love your writing style. And I can't wait for more stories about this team. Looking forward for chapter 3.
Amazing!
LOVE IT!!! You are great with all your stories. Great lines, great characters, great chemistry!! But everything seem to happen so so fast. You do not believe in going slow, do you? Hee Hee hee
Love Chase character as well, the strong and silent one! Pls write a story about him, okay.
Nice twist
I like how you added the ex into the story, it wasn't as bubbly as the first part but it was still cute. Excellent story so far. I can't wait for the next part!
Good chapter.
I'm glad you updated but I was hoping for something a bit longer. I had just gotten into the chapter and then it was over. It's nice to have something you can sink your teeth into. I'm glad to hear that the rest of the story is all written. Hopefully the editing won't take too long and you can post frequently.
sheesh
longer please you are killing me
Nice story
Great second part of the story. I think I can see where this is going but it still leaves me wanting to find out just what is going to happen. Finish it off soon.
Excellent!!!!
I need longer chapters please!!!!!
Wow
I doubt there is another writer on this site with "H" ratings on every story. This series is a further demonstration of your skill and creativity. Thank you!
Well hot damn!!!
I can tell already this is going to be one great story!!!!
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